2/9/2016 3 Comments SorryJustin comes and wrecks my friends project! She worked hard on her science project, I know I helped her. My thought on Justin... Mean , bossy and rude. His friend Jack was a good kid, Before Justin came a long. So when he broke her project I would have thought that Jack would have told him to stop. He used to be friends with me. So when he broke the project a teacher told him to say sorry. So he said sorry. But not like he meant it. So the teacher told him to say it like you mean it. We wore like Wow I think he was the only person who expected more than one sorry from him! So he kind of said it like he meant it. And after the teacher told him to help fix his mess. In the end we had the project all done. Justin asks Jack if he wants to play Basketball with him and he said no and hung out with us for a bit. Now I think were friends. He hardly sees Justin any more.
From Mike
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Mackenzie
2/9/2016 10:56:02 am
Nice paragraph, I would suggest making it a bit longer though. Good job!
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Danai
2/9/2016 11:03:50 am
made it longer
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Riley
2/9/2016 11:06:00 am
I loved it Danai! ( especially when you get to read the full thing ) and maybe next time you could make it more descriptive! Good work!
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